Blog Articles related to the Xiaomi brand [300 - 500 words] [4 x Month]

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  Contest Holder

  • 5 years ago

  Your article is 69% plagiarism. If you want to be a good writer you need to write you own posts and not copy+paste sentences from other posts!

  • 5 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 5 years ago

  Hi, i like that entry. Can you please change a couple of thinks. 1. Title needs to be more SEO friendly. Please choose a title with more keywords related to Xiaomi. 2. Please remove the "Philippines" from the first sentence. My site offers the Xiaomi products not only in the Philippines, but worldwide. 3. Remove the "Poundit.com" link. I am advertising my site and not the "Poundit.com" website. You can change that sentence with "cash back when you buy through xiaomideals.shop" and add a link to my cash back site. 4. On section 3. add links to the products on my site. example: Mijia sphere camera kit -> find it on my site and add that link. The same for the other products. 5. Under section 4,5,6 you are writing about smartphones. I have a category specially for smartphones on my site. You can add that link, so the customer can see it and click it. Thanks in advance, Regards

  • 5 years ago