Design brochure for business.

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  codeunderground

  • 10 years ago

  Thanks for all of your comments. I ll make change in next version

  • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  page 5: I have another page on graphic design that is designed by you.... I will use that with its notes....
  page 6 All good, I will make the pictures stand out a bit more....
  Page 7: dont use my pictures ta very quick and dirty botch job that I did .... I will also shrink it in less than half a page... It is one of the concepts that why why someone should buy from us... goes with the company profile so you can club that as well....
  page 8 - again screen real estate is not effectively utilised..
  
  
  I think in general, you have dropped all the text, may I suggest you use it with the picture...even if you encounter pictures that need to be bought I will, but for now you can use a watermarked version that is more relevant.

  • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  You are heading in the right direction few things if you can do ...
  Page1: Looks like a PPT, if you can make it a bit more punchy and crisp with colors
  Page2: I will reduce this infomation to comver not more than half page for partners and users or even a third of the page ... this can be last page with contact details, and may be a big building in melboune to show office - 101 collins street melbourne australia .... then a row of partners .
  Page3: Queue behaviour and efficicy pic is most relevant..others I am not sure of ... demand heat map is for a shopping area.
  Page 4: again it is inclining towards a powerpoint presentation ...can you combine text and pictures together....

  • 10 years ago