Public Clarification Board

  • islandcommuter
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    Okay, if you are interested in continuing let's try these changes: Keep the type treatment, or a treatment that emphasizes the top word. Move the marl to the left side of the type so the design is more horizontal. Drop this mark (too busy) and use something more abstract, like you did in your design #1 . Let me know if this is not clear.

    • 9 years ago
  • mille84
    mille84
    • 9 years ago

    Thank you

    • 9 years ago
  • islandcommuter
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    I've got to think on this about for a while, but I like the overall shape, and the emphasis on the first word of the domain. I will send you more feedback later.

    • 9 years ago