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A philosophical detective story about music and musicians. It is written originally in Russian and translated into English. The translation is made by the author (by me) and it is awful:). I need a translation from awful English into readable and publisheable English. Actually the book is about spiritual search and one's own place and role in life, but on the example of music. So, my friend, I would really appreciate if you'd have some knowledge of music (wider and more specific — we'll have some heavy metal language) and personal interest in these topics. I write the book with the sincere wish to change people's lives (or else why doing something?), so, who knows, probably it will change yours somehow. Prologue is here (it has been edited, but not by a native speaker): [login to view URL] First chapter is here (comments are on): [login to view URL] Please look at the prologue and the first chapter and give me your calculation (or questions). Chapter 2 is in process. I will write and publish the book chapter by chapter, so I would love to have a good companion for the project. Thanks a lot.